Giving detailed description of crimes in news papers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the government should impose restrictions on them. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary world, details of crime scenes in written and digital sources

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as newspapers, and television are been increasingly shown which has a detrimental effect on society. A significant number of

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feel that there is an urge to force restrictions on these activities. I personally feel that even after imposing restrictions, these can not be controlled fully and

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I do not agree with

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statement. To commence with, appearing of illegal activities on media platform provides a sense of knowledge about what is going on in the outside world to juveniles and

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help them to prepare for the worse.

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, parents teach their children about the wrong things in the world after getting a reality check from these media sources so as to keep their families safe in case they come across any

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incident. Unlawful activities should be visible to the

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so as to give them a view of what is right and what is wrong,

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forcing restrictions is not a solution that can be seen for an unwelcomed consequence.

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news

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channels and printing press earn a major chunk of their money from displaying

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news

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that would be a good hit on their sales, Television rating points and

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would help them gain viewers. Media nowadays is more focused on channelizing

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on their channels that can get the focus of their viewer, which again would not be supporting the fact of pushing reduction on crime

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by the authorities.

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, crime cases

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as rape cases are presented in a way on television and in newsletters so as to touch the sentiments of the readers which

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has a positive impact on them and could help in limiting

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crimes as well. To conclude, it is foremost that limiting offensive

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would not be a clear solution to the outcome being faced as highlighting

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issues creates awareness among the

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and

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helps to curb

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crimes once they would be viewed by a larger group of

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I do not agree with the statement.

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