Giving detailed description of crimes in news papers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the government should impose restrictions on them. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary world, details of crime scenes in written and digital sources

such

as newspapers, and television are been increasingly shown which has a detrimental effect on society. A significant number of

people

thus

feel that there is an urge to force restrictions on these activities. I personally feel that even after imposing restrictions, these can not be controlled fully and

hence

I do not agree with

this

statement. To commence with, appearing of illegal activities on media platform provides a sense of knowledge about what is going on in the outside world to juveniles and

further

help them to prepare for the worse.

For instance

, parents teach their children about the wrong things in the world after getting a reality check from these media sources so as to keep their families safe in case they come across any

such

incident. Unlawful activities should be visible to the

people

so as to give them a view of what is right and what is wrong,

hence

forcing restrictions is not a solution that can be seen for an unwelcomed consequence.

Further

news

channels and printing press earn a major chunk of their money from displaying

such

news

that would be a good hit on their sales, Television rating points and

further

would help them gain viewers. Media nowadays is more focused on channelizing

such

news

on their channels that can get the focus of their viewer, which again would not be supporting the fact of pushing reduction on crime

news

by the authorities.

For example

, crime cases

such

as rape cases are presented in a way on television and in newsletters so as to touch the sentiments of the readers which

also

has a positive impact on them and could help in limiting

such

crimes as well. To conclude, it is foremost that limiting offensive

news

would not be a clear solution to the outcome being faced as highlighting

such

issues creates awareness among the

people

and

also

helps to curb

such

crimes once they would be viewed by a larger group of

people

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I do not agree with the statement.

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