Giving detailed description of crimes in news papers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the government should impose restrictions on them. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world, details of crime scenes in written and digital sources
such
as newspapers, and television are been increasingly shown which has a detrimental effect on society. A significant number of
people
thus
feel that there is an urge to force restrictions on these activities. I personally feel that even after imposing restrictions, these can not be controlled fully and
hence
I do not agree with
this
statement. To commence with, appearing of illegal activities on media platform provides a sense of knowledge about what is going on in the outside world to juveniles and
further
help them to prepare for the worse.
For instance
, parents teach their children about the wrong things in the world after getting a reality check from these media sources so as to keep their families safe in case they come across any
such
incident. Unlawful activities should be visible to the
people
so as to give them a view of what is right and what is wrong,
hence
forcing restrictions is not a solution that can be seen for an unwelcomed consequence.
Further
,
news
channels and printing press earn a major chunk of their money from displaying
such
news
that would be a good hit on their sales, Television rating points and
further
would help them gain viewers. Media nowadays is more focused on channelizing
such
news
on their channels that can get the focus of their viewer, which again would not be supporting the fact of pushing reduction on crime
news
by the authorities.
For example
, crime cases
such
as rape cases are presented in a way on television and in newsletters so as to touch the sentiments of the readers which
also
has a positive impact on them and could help in limiting
such
crimes as well. To conclude, it is foremost that limiting offensive
news
would not be a clear solution to the outcome being faced as highlighting
such
issues creates awareness among the
people
and
also
helps to curb
such
crimes once they would be viewed by a larger group of
people
.
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I do not agree with the statement.
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