Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.
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not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the Linking Words
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and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated.
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ends, students have the option to continue their studies, and depending on the choice of career, that path can be Correct your spelling
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benefitial
or Correct your spelling
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For example
, in the medical field, is important to pursue a major Linking Words
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, entrepreneurs like Bill Gates who Linking Words
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can receive the knowledge they need without a college Correct pronoun usage
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degree
. Looking at it in Use synonyms
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way, it is understandable that it is not the level of studies that determined if someone will be, or not be, successful. Most of the Linking Words
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Besides
Bill Gates, we can look at Walt Disney, who did not go to college, but learned throughout his job as a cartoonist, how to produce movies, and slowly but Linking Words
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, with smart moves like collaborating with armed forces in world war II, created one of the biggest companies: The Walt Disney Company.
To conclude, in some cases it is important to have a Correct your spelling
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therapist, but in others what it takes is willpower and learning through practice. It is inspiring to know that accomplishment and realization can come from inside, and not only depend on external causes.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite