Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is often believed that the higher the

degree

of studies, the higher

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the chance of succeeding.

However

, many people have been the proof that

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not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the

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intechnology

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in technology

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and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated. When

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ends, students have the option to continue their studies, and depending on the choice of career, that path can be

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beneficial

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waste of time.

For example

, in the medical field, is important to pursue a major

degree

so that the individual becomes a good professional and knows how to take care of their patients. But

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,

for example

, entrepreneurs like Bill Gates who

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Microsoft,

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can receive the knowledge they need without a college

degree

. Looking at it in

this

way, it is understandable that it is not the level of studies that determined if someone will be, or not be, successful. Most of the

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is the vision that one person holds and how they manage

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.

Besides

Bill Gates, we can look at Walt Disney, who did not go to college, but learned throughout his job as a cartoonist, how to produce movies, and slowly but

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, with smart moves like collaborating with armed forces in world war II, created one of the biggest companies: The Walt Disney Company. To conclude, in some cases it is important to have a

degree

,

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a nurse or

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occupational

therapist, but in others what it takes is willpower and learning through practice. It is inspiring to know that accomplishment and realization can come from inside, and not only depend on external causes.