More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negation development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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modern era,

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fashionable attires are popular among both

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and

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. The importance of new

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was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many individuals believe that it has

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impact

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such

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, and,

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of money. But, others believe that it is enhancing the creativity of

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notion has both advantages and disadvantages. In

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elaborate on the positive and negative effects of

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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explain

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argument. Yet, the most preponderant fact is that fashionable garments are plays

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role in life. It is linked with

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organization

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as cinema, and,

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. Another pivotal aspect is that it is improving

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creativity because pupils put pressure on the brain to

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the idea and design of the

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. In, addition the article published in the eminent newspaper the Hindustan Times depicts that fashionable wearable items

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poor individuals which have fewer employments.

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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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argument. Though, the bullet point is that resources

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as cotton, water, and, colours, are available in minute volume and

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clothes

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huge. Society

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the products because of attitude and fashion. They believe that it is now useless, and, waste

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now.

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, poor countries

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have fundamental garments to cover the poverty of

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.

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, they put brand new clothes in

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because now it is not attractive and

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of trend.

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, the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that the

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highly influenced

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notion and

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of individuals is not adequate. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that the benefits of

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affair

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instrumental indeed.

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,

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potential influence should not be overlooked either.