More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive or negation development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words

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fashionable attires are popular among both
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and
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. The importance of new
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was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many individuals believe that it has
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, and,
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of money. But, others believe that it is enhancing the creativity of
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trend and
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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will
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argument. Yet, the most preponderant fact is that fashionable garments are plays
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role in life. It is linked with
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. Another pivotal aspect is that it is improving
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creativity because pupils put pressure on the brain to
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the idea and design of the
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. In, addition the article published in the eminent newspaper the Hindustan Times depicts that fashionable wearable items
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generate
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poor individuals which have fewer employments.
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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
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the
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clothes
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huge. Society
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the products because of attitude and fashion. They believe that it is now useless, and, waste
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now.
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, poor countries
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have fundamental garments to cover the poverty of
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, they put brand new clothes in
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because now it is not attractive and
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of trend.
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, the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that the
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highly influenced
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notion and
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of individuals is not adequate. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach
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conclusion that the benefits of
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instrumental indeed.
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,
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potential influence should not be overlooked either.
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