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Nowadays television and the Internet have a greater influence on children’s behavior than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#television #internet #influence #children’s #behavior #parents
People have different views about the new generation. And how they focus on modern technology more than talking with their parents.
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 technology have a bigger influence than the family. There are a lot of reasons one of them is a fictional character and their design because they can match their mind and ideas about life. for another example that it's easy to use and reach them. Most children spend their leisure time watching youtube streamers and cartoons. To illustrate, young children were watching a lot of influencers
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' and a lot more some of them are good and give them great ideas and some of them are the opposite.
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 parents feel guilty that kids don't spend time with them if the family focused more on their child by talking and doing activities it could lower the chance of the young generation playing video games
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 with we got a hard time
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