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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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Choosing a
career
 and making a living out of it is an important decision in a person’s
life
. There is an increasing trend of creating different ways to generate
income
 to afford a balanced lifestyle.
This
 essay analyses the financial and health benefits of having several streams of
income
. Money can buy all the material items in
life
 that create happiness.
For example
, a person can choose to buy a luxury car, and afford an international annual family vacation and a lavish lifestyle
,
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 provided he has abundant financial support. Having different ways of earning money will help individuals to attain the required financial freedom to afford a balanced living.
On the other hand
, if a person has a single source of
income
then
 it becomes difficult for a person to manage monthly commitments. Health is an important wealth any individual should accumulate in his
life
 creating a happy
life
. Creating the right balance of intellectual and physical activity can create a healthy body. In the olden days, an individual chose a single
career
 path and struggled to master the talent. Whereas, in current days, people create choices to find a
career
 path that maximises their talent potential. Constant improvement in an individual’s talent creates new avenues to generate
income
.
Thus
, exploring several
career
 options will create healthy individuals. After analyzation of the financial and health benefits of the people who choose to have multiple
career
 choices and several
income
 streams, it is evident that
this
 new trend should continue throughout
life
 to create a challenging yet happy
life
.
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