In some countries ,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.Other people are not interested in it saying it's boring.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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attention
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apply
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young
persons
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things
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jewelries
,Change the wording
jewelry
pieces of jewelry
quiens
building jugs, sword and other.Correct your spelling
queens
quiet
Linking Words
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that learning Add a comma
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places Change preposition
about memorial
helps
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help
people
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scholars
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ancestors
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us.Because some our of Change the preposition
to
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ancestors
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ancestors'
ancestor's
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people
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ancestors
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my opinion,learning Add the comma(s)
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buildings and other Change preposition
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things
are more and more beneficial for us.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite