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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.

#people #children #home #child #development #school #methods
nowadays there are some methods to teach
children
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school
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 where most
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parents
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 take their
children
 to study but there is
also
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private learning where the teacher
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 to the
children
's house. both
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methods are pretty effective for
children
 to learn the subject but, it comes with
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 output when they grow up. in my opinion, by going to
school
,
student
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are not only learn
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 about every
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 that
important
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for
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 them but they
also
 learn how to socialize with others.
moreover
,
student
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 have to follow all the
regulation
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regulations
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 that occur
such
 as, they need to be in
school
 on time
other wise
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, they will get punished by the teacher.
as a result
 they will get knowledge from every subject and
also
 they become
a
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more disciplined people.
on the other hand
, by learning at home the teacher can be more focused on
your self
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. they will know you better and it is easier to improve what the
children
 lack
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.
hence
, they have a chance to become
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superior
on
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 some specific subjects. it will help them when they grow up. to conclude, both learning from
school
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good choices. by learning at
school
student
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 will not only receive
a
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 educational material but
also
 they will learn how to be
discipline
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 and
also
 they will have
a
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better social
skill
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skills
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. at the same time when you learn at home, people have
a better knowledge
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 in some specific
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 because of the intensity of learning.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tailored learning
  • peer pressure
  • flexibility
  • instill values
  • socialization
  • communication skills
  • specialized facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • diversity
  • structured environment
  • customized education
  • well-rounded education
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