Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion.

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nowadays there are some methods to teach
children
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early age. we have
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school
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where most
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parents
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the parents
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take their
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to study but there is
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private learning where the teacher
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to the
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methods are pretty effective for
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to learn the subject but, it comes with
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output when they grow up. in my opinion, by going to
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are not only learn
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about every
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that
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them but they
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learn how to socialize with others.
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,
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have to follow all the
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that occur
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as, they need to be in
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on time
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, they will get punished by the teacher.
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they will get knowledge from every subject and
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they become
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more disciplined people.
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, by learning at home the teacher can be more focused on
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. they will know you better and it is easier to improve what the
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.
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, they have a chance to become
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superior
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some specific subjects. it will help them when they grow up. to conclude, both learning from
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and home are
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good choices. by learning at
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will not only receive
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educational material but
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they will learn how to be
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and
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they will have
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better social
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skills
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. at the same time when you learn at home, people have
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in some specific
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because of the intensity of learning.
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