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Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has continued its development since the invention of automation. It has played a crucial role in our lives.
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, it has affected many effects positively. Giving an example of
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, via the
internet
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 people do not require to visit foreign
countries
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 to comprehend how other societies live, there are many reasons to support
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 idea, and I agree with
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 opinion.
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 of all, the
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 has become reachable everywhere. We can search for anything by using smartphones, laptops or computers and television.
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, the world is at our fingertips.
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, If a person wants to get knowledge on how to understand other people who live in different counties, he can learn everything about there
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 as traditional food, transportation, the public's purchasing power, historical places, favourite restaurants etc. After
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 learning knowledge, maybe he can make a decision to live, travel etc.
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, the public infers some opinions using
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 technology about other communities.
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, if there is a dispute between two states and
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 dispute has affected negatively human life. We can learn these things via BBC or CNN websites because these websites get info to us about around the world every day and we can deduce some information about these states. In a conclusion,
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 technology has a key to get knowledge about everything. People can deduce some assumptions other
countries
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 use smartphones, computers and television. By using these machines, they do not require to travel or visit foreign
countries
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, and they can change their plans or ideas about foreign
countries
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