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Animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities on land and in sea. Why has this happened? What’s the solution?

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Throughout history, the discovery of new inventions by humans has brought about many changes in nature, animal
species
 and our lives negatively and positively. Especially, after the invention of technology,
people
 have used natural resources much more than needed.
Therefore
 both nature and animal
species
 are
face
 to
face
 with being extinct. There are many reasons and solutions for
this
 idea. The
first
 reason is that water has been contaminated with oil or hazardous things by factories or industries. Factories make products to export the goods to foreign countries and they use some hazardous chemical items to produce something. After using these chemicals, some
people
 throw waste into the sea and by doing
this
, their habitat is threatened by dangerous items and numerous animal
species
 under the sea has to
face
 to
face
 death. The
second
 reason is that society burns trees to build buildings in the forest.
This
 thing causes deforestation and numerous animals which live in the forest has affected in a negative way because their habitat is devastated by human activities.
However
, nations can amend
this
 situation and save animal
species
 to not become extinct.
Firstly
, government and schools should educate society, and the main idea has to be we are living in a world with animals and nature.
People
 are not merely a part of
this
 world. ,
Also
 animals cannot protect their rights but
people
 can. Government and schools should reflect the main idea in the
people
's minds.
Also
, some organizations
such
 as United Nation can create solutions to
this
 issue. They can focus on saving animal
species
 to display consequences to the world. By doing
this
, humanity can deduce some opinions and they can want to protect animal
species
. In a conclusion, because of human activities animal
species
 endanger and society threats their habitat by devastating. But governments, schools,
also
 United Nations can apply some solutions to protect animal lives.
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