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would you agree with the people who think it is better to change career at least once in their life?

#people #change #career #life
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Switching a
career
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 once in a lifetime may turn out to be good for some,while bad for others.Some people believe that it could be beneficial as the true potential of the person could be unleashed.
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,I think
one
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 should choose a
career
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 carefully and not change as it would cause loss of
work
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experience
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 and financial difficulties. On the
one
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 hand,switching
career
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 enables the person to explore himself.If
one
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 does not ever change ways in his
career
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 throughout his life,
then
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 he may not be able to explore his true potential.
That is
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 the reason why people who change paths and leave their current steady jobs and turn towards entrepreneurship,a big percentage of those get successful.
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,exploring other paths in professional life could be helpful in exploring inherent capabilities.
On the other hand
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,it usually takes time to establish oneself in the
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,and changing the
field
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 of
work
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 means going back to square
one
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.
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,it leads towards the waste of
experience
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 that a person has acquired working previously.To illustrate,if someone is working as a banker,and now he wants to become a businessman, past
experience
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 may not be useful.
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,loss of
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past
experience
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 may be
resulted
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 of changing professional domain.
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,to start a new
career
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 in a different
field
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 means getting started on the initial salary which is usually much lower than that of the experienced employee.People that
work
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 in the same
field
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,grow in their careers leading towards a higher demand and higher salary.
For instance
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,the average starting salary of an industrial pharmacist is 35000 rupee,while
one
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 with about five years of
experience
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 may get more than double.
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,starting anew may result in getting paid less. To conclude,changing the
field
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 of
work
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 helps in exploring the temperament in different domains.
Nonetheless
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,it may lead to difficulties
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 as loss of
experience
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 and low salaries.
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