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Many young children have unsupervised access to the Internet and are using the Internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for childrean. Discuss problems and solution.

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Parents
 often fail to keep a record of the things their
children
 do. One of the things that
children
 do without knowing the consequences is, leaking information to anonymous people on the web. In
this
 essay, I am going to share my opinion about
kids
 having access to the
internet
.
Firstly
, phones and computers are being introduced to
children
 at a very small age. Since they think
that is
 fun, they get addicted to the
internet
 very fastly. The
internet
 is filled with many scammers and frauds.
Children
 tend to get attracted towards video games and social
media
 platforms like Facebook and Instagram.
For example
, when they get addicted to any online games, they want to buy something in the game and to do that they put their parent's bank details in the game. Because of doing
this
, huge amounts of money can be lost and that family will face a huge loss. Another example is that, when
kids
 go through social
media
 platforms, they get to be online friends with many unknown people and they can even chat with those folk online and
this
 is where they get stuck. There are some people on social
media
 who have accounts with fake identities and they bait young
children
 to scam them.
First
, they gain trust and
then
 they pull out the information from the
kids
. To stop these things from happening,
parents
 should supervise their
children
's access to the
internet
. They should be strict about
this
 and they should set a time limit for using the
internet
.
Parents
 should not purchase personal phones and laptops for their
kids
. They should not let their
kids
 play too many video games and should advise them to avoid social
media
 at any cost. Getting addicted to the
internet
 can spoil the mental health of
kids
 too. To conclude
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this
, I would like to say that
kids
 should have only limited access to the
internet
 and by taking the necessary precautions mentioned above, anyone can avoid information breaches. If
parents
 keep neglecting their
kids
, they will definitely face major losses.
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