Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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information

through

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the internet currently. It can possibly people easily

access

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wherever and whenever they want to.

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,

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challenges

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for

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us to maintain

this

rapid

information

technology development. Yet, it is not enough for parents to exchange

school

existence. I do believe that

school

have their own small society simulation to face the

student

in real

live

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when they grow up. Especially for

children

whose in the middle of the golden stage of life.

First

of all, We will learn basic knowledge in

anyform

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any form

kind of educational state

such

as

school

, course, training place, etc. Those institutions provide the

student

to

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well

known

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knowledge

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their

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environment cognitive. The

student

will shape their Intelligent Quotient (IQ) for

this

step. For the

children

self

, their examines will about stimulate their surrounding mini

problem

in exercise form. Following that, the

student

will interact with each other. Which means, they become a small society provided by the

school

. Before they are ready to face the real world as a

problem

solver, or specifically for their

self

problem

, the education institute makes sure to have

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rule to regulate achievement and punishment for them.

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simulation law

used

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for upskilling people about responsibility and consequences.

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, It did not found in any form of retrieval

information

because society should face

directly

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and

children

will imitate

apply

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the older. In conclusion, the

information

on the internet provides us to have materials for

self study

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. Yet, it did not use to encourage and enhance

children

's education by parent

self

. Meanwhile, the

school

is providing students

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order to train them for

having

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critical thinking and

problem solving

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problem-solving

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using their Emotional Quotient (EQ).