Many people believe that spending a lot of money on celebrations (birthdays/weddings) is a waste of money. Others believe that it is important for the individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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is a useless notion. But, few people believe that it is

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vital for the pupils and society. In my, opinion the position of money appears to be more rational.

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some advantages and fewer disadvantages. In

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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argument. Yet, the most preponderant fact is that it is

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of a person who is

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their income on festivals

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as birthdays that play a significant role in life. Another pivotal aspect is that marriage is a part of our life we did not deny

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marriage because it is an ancient ritual. Most of the population respects the wedding. Moving

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, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper the Hindustan depicts that birthday and marriage are huge business in

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contemporary world, television and movie is the main reason owing to individuals see these kinds of celebration in the TV. The population is fascinated by

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trend. There are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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trend.

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, the alarming one is that developed countries

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as America, France, and, Germany expend

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of wealth due to

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rich and successful in their life.

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,

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-world countries

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as India, Pakistan, and, Nepal are suffering from starvation, poverty, and, illness owing to their have of minute resources. It is shameful that

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side of the globe people spend huge money and other

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people are starving.

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, we make

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kind of celebration convenient and affordable with the help of budget and methods.

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, the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that 90 per cent of resources are

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by affluent pupils

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because of marriages and birthdays. According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the perks of the affair are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either. I strongly believe that money is a paramount source we did not use in the wrong ways. Though, it

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relies on society and how they spend it.