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Many people disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn a new language. To what exent do you agree or dissagree?

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The pie chart shows the number of
revenue
sources
 and
expenditures
 of a USA charity in 2016. Overall, donated food accounted for most of the
income
, while program services accounted for the most
expenditures
. Comparing the
income
 and the outcome, it is given that the total amount of expenditure is slightly less than that of
revenue
. In detail, the
income
 consists of 86.6% of donated foods and 10.4% of community contributions. There are other
sources
such
 as program
revenue
, investment
income
, government grants and other
income
, and they account for 2.2%, 0.2%, 0.2%, and 0.4% respectively. Their contribution to
revenue
sources
 isn’t as much compared to the two major
sources
 mentioned above.
In contrast
, the outcome has only three items. The main expenditure is program services accounting for 95.8% of the entire
expenditures
, followed by the two other items, fundraising and management and general whose contributions to
expenditures
 are 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.
Lastly
, the total amount of
revenue
sources
 is 53,561,580 USD and that of
expenditures
 is 53,224,896 USD, which means that the
first
 slightly exceeded the latter.
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