Discipline is an ever- increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

in recent times, a good
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student
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undicipline
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discipline
undisciplined
person.
this
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teachers
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knowledge. when the
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unpolite and
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undisciplined
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, the teacher can give them some assignments and samples to
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student
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their environment.
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children is the home. at the home,
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a big task to teach
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children. home is the
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everything.
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some
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in Indonesia
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some information from their mother some basic skills including how to be a
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teacher
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learned how to
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in a good way in
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. in a nutshell,
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good
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disciplinary
is a big challenge for
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teachers
and parents. both of them must teach the
student
in a good way so the kids will have good
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attitude
and
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discipline
in daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • modern schools
  • teachers
  • parents
  • collaboration
  • student behavior
  • performance
  • strategies
  • promoting
  • communication
  • consistency
  • teaching
  • instilling
  • home
  • classroom management
  • authority
  • rules
  • consequences
  • behavioral problems
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