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I will try to explain my huge motivation to study Bachelor’s Degree in
Administration at
.
Since early
I was very interested in mathematics,and I adored challenging logical tasks. In high school, slimes were very popular at that time. I studied the recipe for slimes and started cooking them myself. I bought wholesale boxes and packages and started selling them at school. It was my
experience in the
. I think it was at that time that I realized how interesting it was for me to sell something of my own and have my own personal income. While studying at the Faculty of Education in my
year
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of Lefke, I
was engaged in the resale of different things for girls. I bought cheaper in Aliexpress or Joom and sold it at a markup to friends and acquaintances.
Despite the fact that my experience gave me an excellent
background, there was a lack of professional theory and very little income. Talking with students from the
Administration course at
, I learned that
program provides students with wonderful practical knowledge. I would be happy to continue my education at
.
being one of the best in Europe and in the world, I’m very inspired that
has a rich history. When I watched a video on YouTube about your
campus 2 years ago, it took my breath away to realize how many different epochs and incredible people the
saw. In the video, I looked at students running to the lectures and dreamed that one day I could proudly enter the doors of the
as a student. I will do my best and learn every subject with a huge interest and motivation.
For me personally, the
graduate Maria Montessori has always been a role model. When I started working as a math tutor for children, at
I didn’t understand how to find an approach to each student. Only through long
I managed to find the most effective methods of working with children. I have always been very inspired by the Montessori methodology, which helps children to form creative thinking and imagination. The opportunity to study at the same
where she studied seems breathtaking to me. Perhaps you are wondering why I chose namely Italy
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I’m convinced that everything in Italy has a soul. There is a soul in the family cafes passing down through generations, in cobbled streets,
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architecture, but most importantly, Italy has very sincere and open-hearted people. From
point of view, Italy is a unique country. I really like that Italians do even serious work with pleasure. I would
like to learn how to enjoy every moment of
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while working for the benefit of the world, as Italians do.
I would be incredibly honoured if you gave me the opportunity to study at
. The education received at
will help me to achieve my goals. I understand that it won’t be easy, but the path to a great dream can’t be easy. I believe that really sincere dreams come true!
Thank you for your time and attention.
Sincerely yours,
Aruzhan Zhenissova