Why do I want to study in the university of sapienza

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I will try to explain my huge motivation to study Bachelor’s Degree in
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Administration at
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. Since early
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I was very interested in mathematics,and I adored challenging logical tasks. In high school, slimes were very popular at that time. I studied the recipe for slimes and started cooking them myself. I bought wholesale boxes and packages and started selling them at school. It was my
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experience in the
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. I think it was at that time that I realized how interesting it was for me to sell something of my own and have my own personal income. While studying at the Faculty of Education in my
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the European
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of Lefke, I
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was engaged in the resale of different things for girls. I bought cheaper in Aliexpress or Joom and sold it at a markup to friends and acquaintances. Despite the fact that my experience gave me an excellent
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background, there was a lack of professional theory and very little income. Talking with students from the
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Administration course at
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, I learned that
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program provides students with wonderful practical knowledge. I would be happy to continue my education at
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being one of the best in Europe and in the world, I’m very inspired that
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has a rich history. When I watched a video on YouTube about your
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campus 2 years ago, it took my breath away to realize how many different epochs and incredible people the
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saw. In the video, I looked at students running to the lectures and dreamed that one day I could proudly enter the doors of the
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as a student. I will do my best and learn every subject with a huge interest and motivation. For me personally, the
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graduate Maria Montessori has always been a role model. When I started working as a math tutor for children, at
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I didn’t understand how to find an approach to each student. Only through long
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I managed to find the most effective methods of working with children. I have always been very inspired by the Montessori methodology, which helps children to form creative thinking and imagination. The opportunity to study at the same
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where she studied seems breathtaking to me. Perhaps you are wondering why I chose namely Italy
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I’m convinced that everything in Italy has a soul. There is a soul in the family cafes passing down through generations, in cobbled streets,
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architecture, but most importantly, Italy has very sincere and open-hearted people. From
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point of view, Italy is a unique country. I really like that Italians do even serious work with pleasure. I would
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like to learn how to enjoy every moment of
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while working for the benefit of the world, as Italians do. I would be incredibly honoured if you gave me the opportunity to study at
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. The education received at
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will help me to achieve my goals. I understand that it won’t be easy, but the path to a great dream can’t be easy. I believe that really sincere dreams come true! Thank you for your time and attention. Sincerely yours, Aruzhan Zhenissova

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