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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are many theories recently come up which underline negative aspects of the modern way to communicate. These ideas affirm that personal bonds are decreasing because of new technologies. My opinion is based on the following principles: not to exaggerate
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 and always respect.
The modern
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 society has definitely changed in the
last
 decade and the main reason is foundable in new technological developments. Our way to communicate added
also
 new different features, which give us the possibility to keep in touch with everyone even though the distance. Another advantage is that we can easily meet other
people
 from our room.
Therefore
, our communication possibilities are constantly growing.
For example
, I recently met a person from Canada and we have become friends.
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,
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technology brought all the badness of real life
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 the internet making it bigger. The reason
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disrespectful behaviours are building up is that the lack of reality makes
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 easier. It is common to find awful words, insults or
discriminations
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 under celebrities' posts. The situation is out of control and
people
 prefer to write a message rather than speak in person, especially
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 hard situations. The classic one is when two
people
 have to discuss
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their bond or relationship. Nowadays
this
 is managed online to make it easier. In conclusion, I believe that new technological features help us to keep in touch with loved ones and meet new
people
, but
on the other
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 we should use them properly and not
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. "Virtus in
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media
 stat" is a statement which sums it up well.
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  • messaging apps
  • social media
  • non-verbal cues
  • family bonds
  • dependency
  • digital communication
  • superficial relationships
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • social isolation
  • virtual connections
  • emotional satisfaction
  • real-life interactions
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