You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Thank your friend for staying with them. 2. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday 3. Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter

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Dear Abhinav, How are you? I’ve reached Abu Dhabi and find myself already missing your company. It was really a generous offer to

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at your place in Dubai. You’ve pampered me so well that I feel thoroughly rejuvenated and refreshed after the holidays. I must thank you for giving me the best holiday ever.

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, visiting a city like Dubai would have never been affordable if you

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allowed me to stay with you. I can’t stop thinking of the places I visited there, especially the desert safari you’ve arranged. I had a lot of fun as

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was the first time, I had done adventures like jeep safari, dune bashing and sand skating. Do you remember the local attire we wore there? Anyway, I’ve been going through the camera and found some pictures of us during my stay which you hadn’t seen, so I’m sending them over with the letter. I think they will remind us of the wonderful moments we had together. See you

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next summer, till

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have a happy time. Best Regards, Rubina

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task achievement

Expand on your feelings or emotions during the holiday to make it more personal and engaging.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure a smoother transition between ideas for improved flow.

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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for a personal letter.

coherence and cohesion

Good use of specific details, such as 'desert safari' and 'jeep safari', which makes the letter engaging.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?