you are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. you would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter. . ask about the school . say what kind of accommodation you want . mention any special requests you have (for example diet)

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Dear sir, My name is alma Islam.I am from Bangladesh.I have enrolled on your college in advanced English.my course duration is three weeks.

This

course will be started on 7th march 2023. On the

first

side,I want to know some information about my course details like structure and syllabus.I would be very grateful if you send me details about the academy.

moreover

,I want the arrangement near your institute because I don't like travel.I prefer to stay with my classmates because I think that it will help me to learn English like a native speaker.

This

will lead me not only to improve my academic performance but

also

help me to get my desired job.

That is

why I expect to stay institutional shelter

instead

of outside accommodation.

Lastly

,I want to ask for plant-based food.As I am a Muslim,I love to eat any halal food on my meal and

also

have an allergy to pets, particularly dogs.

Therefore

I would be happy to live in a house without domestic animals. please let me know if the department can arrange my lodgement .I would be grateful for the facility with my special request. Looking forward to your response . Thank you, Yours faithfully, Alma Islam

Submitted by Alma Islam on Sat Jan 14 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

198 words

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