In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food . It is , therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. · Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people eat

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foods

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and face several health issues

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as

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and if authorities could levy a tax on

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issue can be tackled in a better way. Personally , I completely agree with the given essay statement, while I

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think that other factors are

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beneficial to tackle

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problem . The main health issue

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faced by many individuals from eating

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foods

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is the

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. People have become more obese in these recent times and getting prone to several kinds of life-threatening diseases.

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problem has been occurring in each corner of the world .

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, it is becoming very necessary to govern it . If regimes could take a step toward imposing higher taxes on

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food supplies

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could assist to address

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problem

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to some extent . By imposing higher taxes , ultra-processed

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would become costlier which prohibit the daily consumers to take it as their main meal. As a consequence,

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obesity

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could be reduced in an instant way. As

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mentioned in starting that other factors are

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helpful to solve

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. I will explain these elements one by one from now on.

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prominent factor is that higher authorities could educate their

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citizens about the

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of overeating fast food. Another constituent is that schools should enlighten their pupils about the negative impact of overeating unhealthy cuisines on their health because most

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children are fond of eating

foods

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like fries and burgers in their daily routine. In conclusion ,

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schools are teaching their students about the implications of overeating

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foods

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.

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, the efforts made by governments are really helpful to resolve the issue quickly.