Write a letter about changes in a meeting .

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to give you some essential information about the recent modifications
upon
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our planned meeting structure that would decide to hold on
next
oncoming week.
First
of all , I apologize for these sudden changes in our pre-planned meeting because I have to follow the order of our manager . I understand that it is hard for you to arrange everything on time but I will help you to prepare for
this
meeting in a better way . Actually , I have to make changes
in
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the meeting because the manager of our company is willing to invest
large
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amount of funds in our meeting. As he is available only on Tuesday and after he will go on the vacations .
Therefore
,I have to adjust our meeting to Tuesday morning. So, in our new
plan
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the meeting will be held on Tuesday morning rather than Wednesday morning .
Then
,
as
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we were five members
initially
but, now we are seven participants because our two senior officials want to join us in our meeting. I hope that
this
information will be quite useful for you . Yours faithfully, Rahul Sharma.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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