More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With technologies developing ever since the 21st century, the

use

of every folk’s own

cars

is increasing all over the world.

This

reliance on private

cars

can result in several problems. In

this

essay below, the expectable issues and solutions for them will be discussed.

First

of all, when an expanding number of people drive their own car to travel, air pollution and car accidents are expected. The Earth has been experiencing serious air pollution due to gas and oil from automobiles. To illustrate

this

, South Korea is suffering from fine dust, especially in the spring. Polluted air would cause several respiratory problems, which may at

last

make individuals die.

Moreover

, as the number of private

cars

increases, it is clear that there are larger possibilities of accidents.

In particular

, car crashes are reported more frequently these days when people in the world have more

cars

on the street. To figure out the aforementioned disadvantages, the government is trying out diverse methods,

such

as encouraging the

use

of public transportation.

For example

, the municipal government in Seoul developed more bus stops and new subway lines in order to let more people

use

public transportation. It is expected that the

use

of private

cars

decreases and

instead

the

use

of buses, trains, and subways improves. At the same time, to solve issues related to over-reliance on private vehicles, forcing drivers to rest at least once a week has been effective. Particularly, drivers in Seoul should stop driving on their designated day every week. According to some articles,

this

policy has been helpful

to

Change preposition

in

show examples

emptying streets and making a clearer atmosphere. In a nutshell, overly depending on private

cars

may result in environmental damage and accidents on the street. To prevent these possible problems, it is required that every folk

use

more public transportation as well as rest driving more than a day in a week.