The population of cities is increasing and the government encourage people to shift to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is a large

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of

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in

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city

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and the regime motivate both the

city

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residents

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and businesses to shift to the rural

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for the sake of the

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. Personally, I think that there are major drawbacks

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this

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trend

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tend

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such

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as the decline in living

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,economy and many more, while there is only one advantage to the

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that it becomes free from pollution . To Commence with, the disadvantages of shifting toward rural

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.

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of all, the living standard of the

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residents

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might get lower when they start to live in

villages

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. It means that there is a lack of medical care , education and employment opportunities in rural

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which badly

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the lifestyle of rural

residents

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.

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, recent studies show that more rural

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are illiterate nowadays because of

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number

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of schools in their

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.

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, there is a limitation to the growth of businesses when they move

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village locations.

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, there are frequent transport facilities and well-educated

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in towns which help to proliferate various companies, whereas the growth of these businesses

restrict

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in the rural

areas

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because of

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lack of sources of supplies . For illustration,

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a worthless idea in

villages

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because of attracting only a few

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number

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of rural

residents

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.

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, these two things are badly impacted by moving from cities to

villages

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.

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, the only positive side of

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trend is that the

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become

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rid

to

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the

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drastic issue of pollution. By moving toward

countryside

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the countryside

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area , there is a less

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of

people

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in

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city

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the city

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which results in

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less use of personal automobiles and

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decrease the level of carbon dioxide emissions in

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and contributes toward a clear and clean nature. As a consequence, the

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of health issues is reduced in towns .

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, the moving of

people

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contribute

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a positive role to their surrounding

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. In conclusion, higher authorities

helps

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to reduce the pollution in

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environment

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the environment

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through

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encouraging

people

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for shifting

in

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villages

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but, I believe that the drawback outweigh an advantage because it is negatively impacted the living standard of

people

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and the growth of

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industries.