In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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online magazines have
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impact on our lives regarding getting
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that as books or magazines. Because every
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weight and space, and
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because the habit of using social media
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. Thanks to the
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telecomunications
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, newspapers and TV are no longer
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their ideas.
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they venture out their ideas easily
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using online platforms like blogs or social accounts, and become
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capable person
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audience
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of checking websites or directly
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content
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specialised
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scientist
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books and newspapers are good tools to informed
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, our vision
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the
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using online platforms,
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website
websites
web site
and social accounts.
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