You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the information which you included in the article published in your travel
magazine
was wrong. As a regular reader of your
magazine
, I would appreciate the effort and hard work which you are taking to narrate each and every article.
However
, recently you did write about my hometown, which is Agra one of the most popular tourist places in my country ,,
Unfortunately
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you mentioned that the famous Tajmahal is situated on the bank of the Ganga.I am pleased to correct
this
mistake, In fact, The Tajmahal is situated on the bank of Yamuna. Since
this
is the most-rated
magazine
, it is crucial to give accurate data to your valuable customers because most of them are depending on your
magazine
as a travel guide. It would be highly appreciated if you could find a solution for
this
issue and republish the article with an apology note. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Asha
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incorrect information
  • misleading
  • rectify
  • significance
  • credibility
  • fact-based
  • accurate depiction
  • reliable sources
  • misinformation
  • influence public perception
  • tourist attraction
  • reputation
  • publish a correction
  • conduct research
  • consult local experts
  • accurate representation
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