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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

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At the moment, famous
people
 are more well-known for their glamour and wealth than for their
achievments
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achievements
 and
this
give
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bad
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affect
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 on
young
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the young
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 generation. I personally agree with
this
 statement since
celebrities
 can influence
on
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youngsters. In
this
 essay, I intend to support my views before
reasonable
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 conclusion can be drawn.
Fisrt
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First
 of all,
celebrities
has
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huge
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a huge
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 fan base of teenagers.
Therefore
, these young
people
 want to repeat after big names.
However
, these famous
people
not
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do not
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 always give
good
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example
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examples
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 for teens.
Moreover
,
celebrities
 can do
wrong
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the wrong
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 noisy things to hype themselves to
public
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the public
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. As we know, wrong major concepts recall very well
for
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by
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people
.
Hence
, youth want to be on trend and repeat
this bad things
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this bad thing
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. So, we should be aware when taking the example of a famous person
In addition
, celebs are considered teen ideals. Young
people
belives
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 that famous
people
 do not have any minuses. Indeed,
celebrities
such
 as ordinary
people
 as we and can have human failings.
Nevertheless
, they try to hide their flaws and seem perfect.
For instance
, they can photoshop and montage their pictures on social media.
Subsequently
, teenagers can have complexes and self-doubt comparing themselves with famous
people
.
Furthermore
,
such
 big names can manage
people
 to do several actions.
However
,
young
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the young
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 generation cannot control themselves and become addicted to their idol's
opinion
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opinions
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. In conclusion, сelebrities can be role models for the younger generation, but they may not always be
a
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good
example
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examples
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. In brief, famous
people
 can do bad things to glorify themselves and seem perfect, which in fact is not true
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