People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?
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people
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achievements
this
give
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young
generation. I personally agree with Correct article usage
the young
this
statement since celebrities
can influence on
youngsters. In Change preposition
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conclusion can be drawn.
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a reasonable
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First
celebrities
has
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have
huge
fan base of teenagers. Add an article
a huge
Therefore
, these young people
want to repeat after big names. However
, these famous people
not
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do not
good
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a good
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Moreover
, celebrities
can do wrong
noisy things to hype themselves to Correct article usage
the wrong
public
. As we know, wrong major concepts recall very well Correct article usage
the public
for
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by
people
. Hence
, youth want to be on trend and repeat this bad things
. So, we should be aware when taking the example of a famous person
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these bad things
In addition
, celebs are considered teen ideals. Young people
belives
that famous Correct your spelling
believes
people
do not have any minuses. Indeed, celebrities
such
as ordinary people
as we and can have human failings. Nevertheless
, they try to hide their flaws and seem perfect. For instance
, they can photoshop and montage their pictures on social media. Subsequently
, teenagers can have complexes and self-doubt comparing themselves with famous people
. Furthermore
, such
big names can manage people
to do several actions. However
, young
generation cannot control themselves and become addicted to their idol's Add an article
the young
opinion
.
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. In brief, famous Fix the agreement mistake
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people
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