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You have read a magasine article that mentionned a place you are familiar with There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magasine and say what error was explain that you are familiar with the place wgy it is omportant to correct the error

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Dear Madame, Sir, I am writing referring to the article I saw on your magasine yesterday. The title was : Onnion, a tiny village in France. As I am curently living in
this
 area, I was so surprise by
this
 article. I mean, it is a great way for people to known more about
this
 place.
Hence
 the picture was incredible and represent so much the center of my hometown. Unfortunately, there were two mistaken informations about the village : Firslty, the brige was build in 1947 and not in 1984
also
, I firmly believe that for the lecturors it is best to have accurate informations. The
second
 mistake was about the cycling competition wherein the author mentionne that
this
 famous competition and the riders never ride throughout the village. In my opinion,
this
 is two crucial informations about our town, adults and children are willing to visit after reading your paper. It will be for the best to correst those errors for economics reasons. One of the most important reason is that Onnion is a touristic area and people actually came by because of the old bridge and to follow the cycling competition. I look forward to hearing from you or to read the new article. Yours sincerely. Léa
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