You have read a magazine article that mentioned a place you are familiar with. There was a mistake in the article. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine and say What the error was Explain that you are familiar with the place Why it is important to correct the error
Dear Madame, Sir,
I'm writing to you about a script displayed in the 9news magazine related to a Metal manufacturing firm named Metal CNC machine located in northern France.
As a matter of fact, I well know
this
company
as my father spent his whole life working over there as a CNC machinist.
The article described how the company
ended last
year emphasising the reason. In fact, the company
went down due to an economic issue while the covid-19 pandemic but you missed telling another parameter which is essential to me.
The company
was, unfortunately, going through a lack of workers because of the high demand for technicity and knowledge. Hence
the firm was not able to deliver orders on time. It was for sure the beginning of the collapse.
I was wondering if you could change the article or at least make another script explaining this
mistake because it really counts on my father's mind.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sebastien LANIESSE
Correct your spelling
LANXESS
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.