Practice 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, •describe the situation •explain why you cannot continue at this time •say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any ad
Hello teacher Osama , I am sorry I want to cancel the course because
i
don't have enough time now ,But I hope in future I will join again in your course again .
Change the capitalization
I
firstly
, I have a problem with my budget I could not pay my flat rent , therefore
I was looking for a part-time job for five days and then
finally
I found a good job and also
well pay , So now I have full-time work starting at 8:00 AM until 4:00 PM , Also
the second job starting from 6:00 PM until 10:00 PM , i realized recently I can not join to your course .
Secondly
, When i pass the problem budget and if i got enough money , i would leave the part-time jop and study with again , I really want to study and improve my skill However
i need to hard work now .
Thank you , i'm looking forward to hearing back from you .Submitted by osama.mezal7 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs to enhance the logical structure and readability.
Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to punctuation and capitalization to improve the flow and professionalism of your letter.
Task Achievement
Provide a more detailed explanation about what specific action you would like the tutor to understand or take regarding your course cancellation.
Task Achievement
Your letter maintains a warm and respectful tone, appropriate for a letter to a course tutor.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriately addressed.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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