Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

computers

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widely used more and more in education.

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of

people

believe that

this

is a positive trend, whereas others say that it can give negative effects. In my opinion,

computers

can give more opportunities to

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since

people

can get additional information from

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. Both points of view will be discussed extensively in

this

essay.

To begin

, on one hand, those who disagree and believe the popular

use

of

computers

in the educational system will result in an unpleasant situation, do so due to some reasons.

Firstly

, since

people

store all the information in the gadgets they

use

for learning, they can accidentally lose all their data or be hacked by hackers.

For instance

,

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plenty of

people

store their bank card passwords

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computers

.

Therefore

, it is easy for hackers to hack their bank cards.

Secondly

,

instead

of studying,

people

can be distracted by entertainment content on the Internet.

For example

, children and adolescents are prone to

this

problem because they cannot control themselves.

However

, despite these shortcomings, I do not agree that

computers

lead to negative consequences.

On the other hand

,

computers

have a lot of advantages in the field of education.

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First

of all,

people

can

use

computers

for their needs.

For instance

, those

people

who did not understand the topic in the lesson can

use

the Internet to watch

this

topic.

Moreover

,

people

can store unlimited materials in just small technological tools and can

also

access them any time they decide.

For example

, there

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a multitude of applications where

people

can save information. In conclusion, using

computers

for educational purposes is significant at the moment. Because

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computers

gives

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many advantages and can be available every time