Your local council has been doing roadworks along the road outside of your house. This has caused a lot of noise and inconvenience. Write a letter to your local councillor to complain. In your letter, Describe what has happened. Say why you are complaining. Explain what you would like your councillor to do.

Dear sir, Good day. I am writing to bring your notice that a lot of
noise
due to the roadwork, which is going outside of my house. As discussed, my local council has been doing roadwork along the
road
outside of my house. So, due to
this
road
maintainence
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maintenance
activity
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some machinery is making a lot of
sound
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sounds
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which is
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an inconvenience
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inconvenience
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for not only residents around my home but
also
people who are residing
my
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in my
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home as well. The main reason behind my complaint is my
grand parents
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grandparents
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, whose age is more than 90 years and suffering of
heart
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problem
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.
Consequently
,
these machinery
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this machinery noise
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noise
will make panic to them. These
road
works will lead
drastic
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outcome
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outcomes
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to
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for
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the people around my area.
However
, as we know that
these maintainence acitvity
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is indispensable for our society. I request you to inform local
road
workers to finish
this
work as early as possible and try to minimize the
noise
with
noise
cancellations.
Moreover
, please try to stop
the
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work after 6 PM in the evening. So, individuals can sleep at night without any sound. Hope you
are consider
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this
.
Yours'
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faithfully, Ravi
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