You would like to work for a company or organisation in a foreign country. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • Describe the kind of job you would like to do • Explain which country or part of the world you would like to work in • Tell them why you are interested in working in another country
Dear Hiring Manager -
I am Parinita from India and I came across your advertisement on the job portal regarding your agency hiring candidates from different countries.
To begin
with ,I have around 6 years of experience in Human Resources and I have been responsible for overseeing recruitment , performance management , employee engagement and implementing HR policies to ensure a positive work environment in the organisation. Apart from
this
,I also
have experience in IT recruitment .I am willing to continue my career in the same domain because I believe human resources is the backbone of the organisation.
Secondly
, I would like to explore Canada because as I have seen in the portal there are a lot of opportunities in the Human Resources Department. My best friend also
lives in Alberta ,Canada. She will also
support me in case of any contingency.
Actually ,I am interested in working in the international market because it will give me an opportunity for growth in my career.
Waiting for a positive reply.
Regards
ParinitaSubmitted by preetiaug25 on
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using more transitional words or phrases to link your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of starting a new paragraph with 'Secondly,' you could say 'In addition,' for a more natural flow.
task achievement
For a more complete task response, elaborate a bit more on why working in Canada specifically appeals to you, beyond job opportunities and a friend living there. Perhaps mention the work culture or lifestyle that attracts you.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, providing a professional tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
The overall writing tone is suitable for a professional letter, showing respect and enthusiasm.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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