Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

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artist

in the world is role

model

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models

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for all

generation

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especially

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for the youth. I believe it

have

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good

impacts

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for

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on

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the

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teenagers in their social life. it is true that the programme tv and

the

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social media are showing all the activities of the influencer every single day.

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, it has

effected

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affected

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for

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apply

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the people who

following

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it.

For instance

, Arhan Pratama is one of the best player

football

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in football

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in Indonesia. He always shares his activity

in

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social media

such

as when he is playing and learning the strategies during the match. due to his activity, all the fans who see it

,

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will get some

motivations

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motivation

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to do the same things and

starting

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healthy

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lifestyle.

In addition

, some channels tv have a good programme

such

as a modelling stage.

This

is an event showing all the

artist

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artists

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with their best clothes.

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,

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celebrities teach how to do

a

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good makeup so will make the

appearence

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appearance

more cheerful. Not only the fashion

this

event

also

give

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the

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information

how

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to

communication

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in a good way.

this

programme has a big impact

for

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on

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the youth because teaching them to improve

the

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their

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look and

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atitude

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attitude

altitude

in every

situations

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. In a nutshell, the

artist

is a key for all generations

especially

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for the youth. The teenagers must

following

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follow

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an

artist

which has a good personality. so, the community can get a lot of benefits

such

as motivation to do some exercise and how to dress well in any

events

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event

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.