Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge . To what extent is this a positive or a negative development ?

In

this

contemporary era, everything is easy

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because

of new technologies

such

as the Internet, and, artificial intelligence. It is

also

provided music and books which are copyrighted and pupils download free music from websites . In my, opinion

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notion has some advantages and disadvantages. In

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, essay we will

further

elaborate on the positive and negative effects of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

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argument but the most preponderant fact is that it is

opportunity

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to

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for

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poor individuals who

not

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buy novels and Cds from the shop,

acquire

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knowledge and information free of cost. Another pivotal aspect is that

organization's

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organizations

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save wealth because the advertisement cost is

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owing to

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publicity and the population share links

to

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each other.

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one sure example is that a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that most

of

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the

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third

-world countries

such

as India, Pakistan, and, Nepal

increasing

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their literacy rates with the help of

moder

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modern

technologies. For, instance it

is

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also saves

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also

save

environment

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due to books download from the internet,

less

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trees use for paper.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend. Yet, the most alarming one is that due to

free

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downloading of books and music,

the

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firm's

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firms

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such

as T-SERIES, and, T-BOOK likes companies not making

profit

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a profit

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and it

is destroy

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jobs and

increase

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increasing

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unemployment by leaps and bounds.

Besides

, the article published in the eminent newspaper depicts that 95 per cent

organizations

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of organizations

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are

stop

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their online websites , because of

this

concept and genuine buyers are suffering. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that the firms are filing cases against the owner of Google because they did not take action against and maybe in future, we do not use Google. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can the conclusion that the perks of modern technologies are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks of the internet should not be overlooked either.