Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Traditionally, kids start to learn a new
language
in secondary school
, some studies reveal that could be beneficial to start this
in primary school
. In fact, there is some evidence that learning a language
as soon as possible brings more pros than cons and I agree with this
argument. In this
essay, I will explain the reasons why I concur with it and I will provide some proof from my experience.
To begin
with, I can confirm that learning a new language
in primary school
has more benefits than learning it late, because the brain of a kid, especially when he is 4-5 years, is like a sponge. It absorbs everything and can be easy for him to learn a new language
, which is, usually, more difficult to be learned from older people. A minor could learn even other 2 or 3 languages. For example
, it is easy to see a situation where an adult says a bad word and the kid repeats it fast and easily. This
is explained by evidence that the brain's kid works faster and better.
Nevertheless
, some people believe that teaching a new language
to a child in primary school
is not as good as it looks, in fact, they find more disadvantages than advantages. For instance
, they believe that this
could take up too much time in the life of a child, depriving him of a carefree childhood.
To conclude, I believe that if the teaching is run up without constrictions, but with an easy and happy approach, children can just enjoy their learning and develop a love for the languagesSubmitted by frinfri93 on
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