There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company.
Dear Sir or Madam
The reason why I'm writing
this
letter to you is that I want to complain about a problem,which I face in your transport service every day. I have been experiencing uncomfortable and worse service for several weeks.
At the outset,the primary problem is that the company's buses come late daily and they distribute my schedule. For
this
reason, several times I came late to my work and skipped my important meetings.
Additionally
, some buses are so dirty with some rubbish like papers,and bottles, and they are incredibly slow and air conditions do not work in peak hours. I and other users cannot go to their location comfortably and safely.
I understand that scheduling bus times is challenging work. However
, if you solve all these problems, this
company's rate will increase.
Eventually, I hope you will solve these misunderstandings in the near future and create the most flexible timetable.
Yours faithfully,
Murodjon QodirovSubmitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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