There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company.

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Dear Sir or Madam The reason why I'm writing

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letter to you is that I want to complain about a problem,which I face in your transport service every day. I have been experiencing uncomfortable and worse service for several weeks. At the outset,the primary problem is that the company's buses come late daily and they distribute my schedule.

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reason, several times I came late to my work and skipped my important meetings.

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, some buses are so dirty with some rubbish like papers,and bottles, and they are incredibly slow and air conditions do not work in peak hours. I and other users cannot go to their location comfortably and safely. I understand that scheduling bus times is challenging work.

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, if you solve all these problems,

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company's rate will increase. Eventually, I hope you will solve these misunderstandings in the near future and create the most flexible timetable. Yours faithfully, Murodjon Qodirov

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses more clearly on a single idea for even greater clarity.

logical structure

Consider checking the placement of some commas for improved readability.

greeting and closing

The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body, and closing.

suitable writing tone

The writing tone is appropriately formal and suitable for a complaint letter.

complete response

The response covers the task prompt well by identifying specific issues with the service.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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