A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your company. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/ her Explain how to apply for the job

Dear Smith, I am writing

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letter to you to know a vacant that might be fit for you.

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vacant is available at the same company which I have been working for since

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year and the post is a junior biologist in a fish breeding centre. The main role is to take the responsibility of breeding until become fingerlings.

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, maintaining the brooders section will be directly under your response which is the most sensible unit in the company.

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, managing the workers in your section will be extra responsible for you and it will be very beneficial for your carrier and you can learn about human resource management in a real environment.

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, you have more responsible don't get panicky and stressed because you have a good senior biologist to guide you always and he is a good gentleman as well as an experienced guy.

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you can learn many things relevant to your field in a very short period. I would like to suggest you apply directly for

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position through the company website

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of getting help from employment agencies. I am looking forward to hearing good news from your side and good luck. Best Regards

Indunil

Correct your spelling

India

indunil14

Jan 16, 2023

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