In some societies it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?
Unquestionably,
health
is pivotal and invaluable. People
might maintain their health
through excessive sports, food supplement
, and medicine. Another belief is that some Fix the agreement mistake
supplements
people
has
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have
its
method particularly normal life in their lifespan. I firmly agree with Change the word
a
this
latter notion, and my opinion will be discussed in further
paragraphs with a sensible conclusion.
First
of all, there are several simple ways to be healthy in everyday life, including people
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for people
might
do not Correct pronoun usage
who might
strenuous
routine Add an article
a strenuous
activity
. In Fix the agreement mistake
activities
this
circumstance, all people
might simply go jogging to take care of health
. Correct pronoun usage
their health
For instance
, people
want to jog in the morning because the air is still fresh and the sunlight is rich in vitamins both
the skin and Change preposition
for both
body
. Correct article usage
the body
As a result
, this
activity could keep people
healthy without doing severe exercises.
Furthermore
, healthy food is well-consumed similarly
to food containing nutrition, vitamins, and protein. Having a simple lifestyle is workable Change the word
similar
in
every day like Change preposition
apply
sleep
enough, Wrong verb form
sleeping
usually
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,usually
people
sleep about six to eight hours per day and eat regularly. In other words
, people
must be balanced with their needs so that people
have well-being in a normal lifestyle. For example
, some people
have habitual action
like breakfast and if Fix the agreement mistake
actions
people
do not eat in the morning then
they will get sick. As a result
, balanced
diet both equal and equitable ought to Correct article usage
a balanced
good
and right so that Add a missing verb
be good
people
in the lifespan will lead to healthy
and longevity.
To conclude, Replace the word
health
although
people
have to think more adequately about their health
, neither
exercise regularly nor regulate their natural life. Correct pronoun usage
they neither
However
, it will depend upon the people
’s mindsets and which view they favour.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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