Nowadays many people have an unhealthy diet and do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons behind this trend? How we can encourage these people to live a health life.

citizen

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consuming unhealthy foods and do not

exercise

regularly are issues that many

people

concern

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in

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about in

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a

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present day. I will discuss why

this

is the case and will suggest some practical solutions. One of the major issues is that there are a number of

restaurants

that provide delicious tastes,

however

, unhealthy for life.

For

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example

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,

those

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are fast food, BBQ and Shabu ; MC Donalds, KFC, Burger King, and Momo. I

also

had a burger at Burger King with my

colleages

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colleagues

for lunch yesterday because the restaurant is easy to find and

foods

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the foods

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are delicious and easy to grab. In order to tackle

this

problem,

government

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the government

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should do something to ensure the healthy lifestyle of

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the citizen

a citizen

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.

First

of all, most of these

restaurants

are imported from other countries.

For instance

,

United

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States of America,

United

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Kingfom

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Kingdom

and

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the Japanese

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Japanese

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.

Therefore

,

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the governement

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governement

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government

should

increase

tax

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taxes

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on imported

restaurants

. Another concern is

people

do not work out regularly.

This

is because they have a lot of

works

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work

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and could not allocate their time

on

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to

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exercise

. They may

earning

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little money from their jobs.

As a result

, they have to do many works to live their life.

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, Thailand is known as a

low cost of living

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country for foreigners,

however

, when

comparing

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to Thai citizens, our standard income could not effort a basic lifestyle. Having a meal

on

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in

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shopping malls is

such

a special event. The effective solution

is

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for

government

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the government

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is

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to

increase

people

's standard income. Once,

our

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we

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finanical

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financially

stable, we could have time to do many things like

exercise

. In conclusion,

this

essay examines two reasons why

people

eat unhealthy food and do not work out regularly; there are a number of unhealthy

restaurants

and

people

could not allocate their time

on

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to

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exercise

due to

hard working

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hard-working

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lifestyle. To tackle the

first

, the solution is for

government

to

increase

the tax

of

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imported

restaurants

. To address the latter, it is advised that

government

should

increase

people

's standard income.