Nowadays many people have an unhealthy diet and do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons behind this trend? How we can encourage these people to live a health life.
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consuming unhealthy foods and do not Fix the agreement mistake
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exercise
regularly are issues that many people
concern
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present day. I will discuss why Correct article usage
the
this
is the case and will suggest some practical solutions.
One of the major issues is that there are a number of restaurants
that provide delicious tastes, however
, unhealthy for life. For
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those
are fast food, BBQ and Shabu ; MC Donalds, KFC, Burger King, and Momo. I Correct pronoun usage
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for lunch yesterday because the restaurant is easy to find and Correct your spelling
colleagues
foods
are delicious and easy to grab. In order to tackle Correct article usage
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problem, government
should do something to ensure the healthy lifestyle of Add an article
the government
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citizen
. Fix the agreement mistake
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First
of all, most of these restaurants
are imported from other countries. For instance
, United
States of America, Correct article usage
the United
United
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the United
Kingfom
and Correct your spelling
Kingdom
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the Japanese
Japanese
. Replace the word
Japan
Therefore
, Correct article usage
the governement
governement
should Correct your spelling
government
increase
tax
on imported Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
restaurants
.
Another concern is people
do not work out regularly. This
is because they have a lot of works
and could not allocate their time Fix the agreement mistake
work
on
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to
exercise
. They may earning
little money from their jobs. Change the verb form
earn
be earning
As a result
, they have to do many works to live their life. For instance
, Thailand is known as a low cost of living
country for foreigners, Add a hyphen
low-cost-of-living
however
, when comparing
to Thai citizens, our standard income could not effort a basic lifestyle. Having a meal Wrong verb form
compared
on
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in
such
a special event. The effective solution is
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government
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the government
is
to Unnecessary verb
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increase
people
's standard income. Once, our
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finanical
stable, we could have time to do many things like Correct your spelling
financially
exercise
.
In conclusion, this
essay examines two reasons why people
eat unhealthy food and do not work out regularly; there are a number of unhealthy restaurants
and people
could not allocate their time on
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to
exercise
due to hard working
lifestyle. To tackle the Add a hyphen
hard-working
first
, the solution is for government
to increase
the tax of
imported Change preposition
on
restaurants
. To address the latter, it is advised that government
should increase
people
's standard income.Submitted by ak.porawan on
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