SOME PEOPLE PREFER RURAL LİFE AND THE OTHERS PREFER LIVING IN THE CITIES.WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THEIR PREFERENCES.WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES ABOUT THIS SITUATION

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Globally, the majority of

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think that the rural environment is for the poor and there lesser

opportunities

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there and that the urban area it's for the rich and many

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and discoveries can be found there. Personally, I think it is better to live in the

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than

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home town .

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issue.

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, there is a saying that living in the

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is for relaxation. The occupants in the

village

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have some advantages which include, a peaceful environment, less pollution, reduce criminal activities etc.

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, there are

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some disadvantages of living in the

village

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which include, limited

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, inability to explore different ideas and reduce exposure. Meanwhile, despite the cons,people still prefer situating in rural areas ,especially in old age.

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, my uncle when he was in his 20s, decided to leave his home town to the

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to find himself and explore, reaching the

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decided to open a business which later made him rich and made investments for his retirement. In his late

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he decided to retire and return to the

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, where he rested and

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on his lifetime achievement.

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, life in the

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is not as rosy as it seems, even though they are greater

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, good connections, better light, water and electricity, there are

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some cons

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as road traffic accidents, increased air and noise pollution, expensive lifestyle etc but some individuals still prefer the life there because there are high chances of them getting their dream job and achieving their goal by becoming successful. In summary, I am of the opinion that people should live in an urban environment rather than a rural setting because they can be able to explore the world and face different life challenges which will make them become a better version of themselves.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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SOME PEOPLE PREFER RURAL LİFE AND THE OTHERS PREFER LIVING IN THE CITIES.WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THEIR PREFERENCES.WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES ABOUT THIS SITUATION

Fully explain your ideas

Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first sentence. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the art and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?