To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the population are still growing rapidly,

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supply

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became

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an important issue that needs to be solved. Countries' governments suggest

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using

insects

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as a source to produce

foods

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.

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, people have different

prospectives

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on insect

foods

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. Here are my opinions about using

insects

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to make

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foods

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.

Acorrding

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scientific research that I accessed while doing my school project, there are many

benifits

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benefits

of eating

insects

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with, some

insects

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have more

protiens

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proteins

protein

than the same amount of meat that you consume, which can make the consumer feel full after only eating a few of them.

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, the population of

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are much more than the population of

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edible animals.

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, the reproduction speed of the

insects

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are

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significanly

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significantly

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effecient

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efficient

than the speed of the edible animals, as

insects

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can give birth to 100 baby

insects

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at once while the animals can only normally give birth

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to one digit. There are

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downsides

of

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eating

insects

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, eating

insects

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might cause a huge impact

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the food chain, which might make the other creatures experience starvation and even

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cause

extintions

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extinctions

to the creatures.

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, there are not enough

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proving that eating bugs will not have

long term

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effects

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the human

bodies

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, whereas people are eating

meats

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for hundreds of thousands of years, letting us know that eating meat won't affect our bodies.

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, bugs are too small,

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we might require to eat a considerable amount of them at once to feel full. In conclusion, despite the fact that there are some downsides, they are not unsolvable.

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excellent solution

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the lacking of food supply.