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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comprehensive curriculum
  • Life skills
  • Financial literacy
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Vocational training
  • Diverse interests
  • Balanced educational approach
  • Physical education
  • Mental health education
  • Critical thinking
  • Creativity
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Global citizenship
  • Environmental awareness
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