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In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of extreme or adventure sports?

#adventure #sports
according to me, there are a lot of advantages of extreme and
adcenture
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adventure
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 as once a person undergoes something extreme, it unlocks his/her fears and not only
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 liberating but can have tremendous leverage on your
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, the other main advantage being that extreme / adventure
sports
 allow us to push limits physically and mentally, shaping us to a better and stronger human being. life is mostly about experiencing new things and pushing boundaries and
such
sports
 allow us
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variety
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 of our emotions and
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, which not only is a beautiful feeling but a feedback loop of setting new boundaries for ourselves. whereas, the disadvantages
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 that these
sports
 can be very dangerous and brings a lot of risk to one's life which is always a major
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consideration
 before opting for it. some
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also
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 certain triggers as
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 capacity to handle
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 is not
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 trauma as the threshold of
such
 experience is too extreme for them.
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