the internet transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problem that did not exit before. what are the most serious problem associated with the internet and what soluction you can suggest?.

it is certainly true that the internet makes it easier to send and received details in a few minutes, on the other ,hand there are some activities that are harmful that have not happened before. after providing carefully analysing of the

problem

has risen so sharply in the world.

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shall suggest a number of ways to tackle the

problem

. in beginning,

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is one of the worst evils. there are many reasons which are to be blamed for it. the

first

main reason is

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irregular

network

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. because these networks are providing illegal content to users

such

as blue movies, pages and news. mostly these websites visited by

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groups, after visiting these websites they don't focus on studying and start thinking about

this

content, even start searching same content on other platforms. The

second

significant reason is hacking.

technology

made to make life easier but few ethics are used in the wrong way. it is called hackers. they hack a

government

security

system

with the help of

technology

,

then

they start blackmailing authorities for realising some criminals from jail and ask for some amount to protect is data.

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,

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some masses are offering jobs to

people

, while these

people

ask money for to provide jobs in a multinational

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like Amazon, tata and reliance.

however

,

this

problem

can be looked after well by several precautionary measures,

first

and foremost solution is the authorities are required to apply strict rules for safety. whereas

people

don`t have to fear about police and the

government

.

government

should put on age group verification for all networks. if age is verified which network is required for access? ,

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it's not working.

thereafter

, some other measures like the

government

need to improve a security

system

, so these

people

can`t hack the

government

system

,

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government

can track these

people

within hours. if they trying to hack a

system

. these days parents are very busy in life, and even if they need to focus on children's activities, they need to check his/her mobile regularly based

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can

also

be implemented to reduce the several effects of the mentioned

problem

. conclusion, To conclude,

although

there are several legitimate concerns regarding the internet,

thus

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the community are used

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internet, and they are happy with the

technology

but due to a few ethics who do illegal activities, folk can`t believe

technology

is Wrong, if the above mentioned taken into consideration, none septums insurmountable.