Write a letter to your landlord to ask about repair work that was not completed successfully. Write What the problem was What the repairs did What you expect

#landlord #repair #work #repairs

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to divert your attention towards a matter which gives me a hard time while living in

this

apartment. A few weeks ago, I sent you a letter to inform you that the front

door

's handle was broken and the shower

door

needs some repairing.

Besides

, you replied to it.

Moreover

, the

last

Sunday you called a repair man to fix both the problems. A few hours later after fixing the shower

door

, he claimed that he did not have any suitable types of equipment to restore the front

door

's handle.

However

, he never came back to renovate the

door

again.

Furthermore

, I would really appreciate it if you could call him again or send another repair person to solve

this

situation.

Lastly

, I don't feel safe as the front

door

is not fixed yet. Thank you I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience Best Regards Yours Faithful Sandeep Kaur

Submitted by sandeepbhandal12 on Wed Jan 18 2023

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8 paragraphs

161 words

9.00

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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