Nowadays people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this?
Unquestionably, the problem is a lack of eating habits, and hardly ever balancing diet is escalating at an alarming rate. There are many reasons for the same, and my opinion will be discussed in
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On the one hand, the major reason which can be stated is less eating, it can cause our bodies to become unhealthy, and we do not have the energy to do daily activities. In Linking Words
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circumstance, a fact known is that some researchers argue that if we eat every morning, we will have energy. Another problematic cause is less eating, which can cause asthma, so it was not good for us. Linking Words
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who have asthma in their body, it means that it is dangerous to eat too late.
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health becomes kept healthy in daily life.
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