Nowadays people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this?

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Unquestionably, the problem is a lack of eating habits, and hardly ever balancing diet is escalating at an alarming rate. There are many reasons for the same, and my opinion will be discussed in
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paragraphs with a sensible conclusion. On the one hand, the major reason which can be stated is less eating, it can cause our bodies to become unhealthy, and we do not have the energy to do daily activities. In
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circumstance, a fact known is that some researchers argue that if we eat every morning, we will have energy. Another problematic cause is less eating, which can cause asthma, so it was not good for us.
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, John always has breakfast every morning. If John has not had breakfast in the morning, John would have gotten sick.
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who have asthma in their body, it means that it is dangerous to eat too late.
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, regarding diet, which is someone wants diet to less fat in their body. One of the solutions is regular exercise.
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, less eating for dietary reasons is
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not good.
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can do Yoga, go to the gym, and
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, so that our bodies stay healthy. As a sequence,
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health becomes kept healthy in daily life. To sum up,
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solving a global issue is not easy,
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with the joint efforts of the
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, control can be taken over the problem with the aforementioned suggested measures. I believe that everyone should come forward to mitigate
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, it will depend upon the government’s mindsets and which view they favour.
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