Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals claim that ladies are able to join their nation's forces. But others reject

this

notion and believe that girls are not eligible for

this

kind of

jobs

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. In my, opinion the position of

women's

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in country

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appears to be more rational and

this

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

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argument but the most preponderant fact is western countries are facing

shortage

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of the population, for , example in Syria, Israel, and, South Korea females join

army

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and police forces because

the

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apply

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government is mandatory

to

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all pupils. Another pivotal aspect is most of the weapons are light weights ,

Therefore

, ladies use

it

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them

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efficiently. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that in the war of

Russian

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Russia

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- Ukraine,

womens

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women

play a vital role owing to

majority

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of the males

are

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deid

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denied

did

dead

initially

.

Furthermore

, males have less amiable compare to feminine.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

Although

, the most alarming one is

males

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males'

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physical potential is

mighty

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rather than girls.

Besides

, massive assault

such

as AK47, and, AK56 is too heavy, maybe it is challenging for

womens

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women

women's

to carry

on

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shoulders

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to

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for

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24 hours.

Moreover

, a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed most of the

failure

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in wars cause

to

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apply

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women due to

have

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minute skills for, instance leadership, and,

decision making

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.

Similarly

, cruelty to ladies

in

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is

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increasing by leaps and bounds in

war

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the war

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field. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion, that the perks of the girls in war are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.