Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many individuals claim that ladies are able to join their nation's forces. But others reject
this
notion and believe that girls are not eligible for this
kind of jobs
. In my, opinion the position of Fix the agreement mistake
job
women's
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women
in country
appears to be more rational and Add a hyphen
in-country
this
will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriads of reasons which will further
explain this
argument but the most preponderant fact is western countries are facing shortage
of the population, for , example in Syria, Israel, and, South Korea females join Add an article
a shortage
army
and police forces because Correct article usage
the army
the
government is mandatory Correct article usage
apply
to
all pupils. Another pivotal aspect is most of the weapons are light weights , Change preposition
for
Therefore
, ladies use it
efficiently. Moving Correct pronoun usage
them
further
, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that in the war of Russian
- Ukraine, Correct your spelling
Russia
womens
play a vital role owing to Correct your spelling
women
majority
of the males Add an article
the majority
are
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being
deid
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denied
did
dead
initially
. Furthermore
, males have less amiable compare to feminine.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this
trend. Although
, the most alarming one is males
physical potential is Change noun form
males'
male's
mighty
rather than girls. Correct quantifier usage
more mighty
Besides
, massive assault such
as AK47, and, AK56 is too heavy, maybe it is challenging for womens
to carry Correct your spelling
women
women's
on
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them on
shoulders
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their shoulders
to
24 hours. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed most of the failure
in wars cause Fix the agreement mistake
failures
to
women due to Change preposition
apply
have
minute skills for, instance leadership, and, Change the verb form
having
decision making
. Add a hyphen
decision-making
Similarly
, cruelty to ladies in
increasing by leaps and bounds in Correct your spelling
is
war
field.
To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion, that the perks of the girls in war are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.Add an article
the war
a war
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