t is believed that governments should spend taxes on providing
healthcare
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,
facilitiesCorrect word choice
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, whereas other
people
believe other things are much more important than
healthcare
. While I understand other areas,
such
as infrastructures, job opportunities,
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, should be financed
healthcare
should be prioritized. I believe that
healthcare
should be the main concern of
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society
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some reasons.
On the one hand, there are numerous issues related to
this
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which the authority is responsible for, nowadays.
To ensureFix the infinitive
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the
health
state of every individual is utterly significant, but it does not mean they can easily ignore other problems related to poverty,
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of
environmentAdd an article
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,
education
,
buildingCorrect article usage
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industry and all other intrinsic sectors.
For instance
, in some developing countries where there are a number of residents in
some Correct quantifier usage
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certain areas that encounter water shortage, that
also
leads to another chaotic challenge that should be addressed immediately
such
as various kinds of diseases that dissipate rapidly resulting
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epidemic and
pandemicFix the agreement mistake
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; Even if there
areChange the verb form
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a lot of money spent on
healthcare
, it still does not have any means to resolve the issue under worse housing condition.
On the other hand
,
healthcare
is the foundation of
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life. It means that having a good mental
health
condition
also
leads to total wellness
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oneself; Almost all
people
could not do any activity
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in
this
modern era. With
this
, there are only fewer probabilities to execute all the activities or plans
people
set
fromChange preposition
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themselves
such
as : working or taking up courses for self-development and most particularly for those who are looking after their children-parents.
In addition
, if
largeChange the article
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amount of money is allocated for
other government sectorChange the wording
another government sector
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, like
education
, the citizens could still not do anything meaningful if they are not in good shape or
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experience
health
ailments,
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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could
resultAdd the preposition
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a decrease
ofChange preposition
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productivity as a whole. In the Northern-European countries,
for example
,
people
can avail
healthcareChange preposition
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services for free and it leads to a more efficient living in terms of their job,
education
,
qualityCorrect word choice
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time spent with their family, peers, friends and significant others.
Thus
, the impact of not being fully attuned to their
health
condition,
people
will
also
have some social issues regarding the national GDP with a potential of having much higher as compared to those in other countries.
In conclusion, even though there are enormous yet significant
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earmarked /
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aided by monetary assistance, I reiterate the idea that
healthcare
is the most intrinsic part/ brink based on the aforementioned.