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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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The popularity of Solar
Power
 usage in household appliances has increased in many countries. Despite its obvious advantages as clean
power
, there are some issues that need to be considered when developing equipment that requires solar as the main
energy
.
This
 essay will examine the drawbacks and benefits of
this
 kind of
energy
 and give possible recommendations for its shortcomings. In terms of benefit, it is undoubted that solar cell has provided clean and promising
energy
 for human. Compared to the traditional one which is usually dealing with environmental issues, solar
power
 is green
energy
 because it does not produce pollutants that can endanger all the living things around humans. Due to the increased number of people living on the earth, many scientists doubt that unclean
energy
such
 as fuel, coal, or gas will survive to support us living in
this
 world. Solar
energy
,
however
, has an unlimited resource because it captures
energy
 directly from the sun and converts it into various types of
energy
 based on the needed appliance.
Although
 claimed as future
energy
,
this
power
 suffers from some disadvantages that need to tackle.
First
 of all, many developing countries still face difficulty to implement
this
energy
 since the cost to obtain is very expensive. They prefer to use an old one because traditional
energy
 can support massive people and is affordable. According to the growing body of research, with the same price, users can buy double the traditional
energy
 of
the
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solar cell. Based on that analysis, it is recommended that developed countries and scientists should share technologies that make solar affordable to be used by everyone on
this
 earth. To sum up,
solar
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 cell is very beneficial as green
power
 and has a massive source to support humans.
However
, its drawbacks need to be handled in order to create real
energy
 used for all people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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