Travelers and business people often come into contact other cultures briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so?

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Some
people
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and
business
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people
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get in touch with other
countries
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people
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and it directly
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them
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know about
the others culture
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the other's culture
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. That interaction reveals different benefits.
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, we live in a big world and ,
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we have lots of unknown places all over it. Some of us directly work with foreign
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. Each contact with the foreign
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of other
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brings them a different aspect of local culture.
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, in
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,meetings
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talk about each other
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'
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, habits and so on. Lots of
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pay an amount of
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to travel and learn about other
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.
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,
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people
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just get
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information without any other effort. On the other ,hand travellers, who are well-known mostly doing it with sponsors or getting donations from their viewers, are on the positive side of
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discussion. They go to almost every country without paying no
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besides
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they taste
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' famous dishes, stay with local
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and even demonstrate their life for a short time. A lot of
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need to spend a bunch of
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and time to learn
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about
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other human
cultures
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over the internet or in person,
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travellers can do it when it is possible.
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, getting information about someone's country requires lots of time and
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, but some the
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such
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as travellers or
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people
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who are related to foreign
countries
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have already changed
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situation to their advantage and directly learning
cultures
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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